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[绿意盎然] 【欲望的宿命】(1-61)完结

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这是第二次看作者大大的文章,相比较与“妻形”,这部作品的结局更残酷、更虐心!
和前作相比,减少了关于性的描写,更多的是对剧情和心理的描写,对于女主出轨的来龙去脉详细的进行了交代,整个脉络合理且流畅。心理描写比前作更胜一筹,刻画出了女主开始纠结到最后不舍的心路历程。只是结局让孩子承担罪孽过于沉重!
读完全文,令人沉思,也许男主能多关心一下女主、多注意一些生活细节,这个悲剧本可以避免!
愿大家都能珍惜眼前人!
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